Her perfect slim form,
A temptation to man and woman,
Rise from the shimmering waters.
Her graceful form break through the rivulets with every stride.
Her movements in the sea was amble and confident like she was Poisedon’s very own mistress.
So graceful, carefree and light afoot,
The birds were jealous.
The sea clings to her
As droplets on her skin,
Not keen to let go.
The wind happy to see her emerge,
Follows her around,
Gentle blowing away every droplet of waterย in rivalry.
The earth she stepped on as she reached ashore,
Part ways to make for her strides.
For a short while, her footprints were the earth’s relic
Like twin peaks on a mountain,
Her breasts sit firmly on her beautiful silhouette.
The curved arch of her buttocks looked like twin sand dunes.
Her eyes! Oh her eyes!
The sun and the moon were put to shame with the rays they cast.
Each eye brow looked like the new moon in their perfection.
I sat staring,
Mouth ajar,
All that loveliness in one body.
How could the creator put all life’s beauty in one form?
Man and woman,
Girl and boy,
Myself and I,
Thought as one,
“It would be amazing to inhabit that body.”
Little did we know,
It was so dark and stormy inside,
No amount of sun could brighten her core.
Image credit: Mysticsartdesign
Excellent write Aweni!
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Thank you Tamara๐
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You are quite welcome, I’m a fan, been missing out on visiting and finally getting the chance too read
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I really really love your write ups so it is an honour that you like mine. I hope I don’t dissappoint….x
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Aww Thanks! And you never do๐ ๐
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Yaay!!! Thank you ๐๐!!
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๐ you’re welcome!๐
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Wow!
my sentiments
copied, then wow
again, to the core
busted.
my
thanks, in
appreciation of your
appreciation of the female
form,
sad
the ending.
but dreams can,
and often do come
true
keep
writing, your
verbosity fills each
page with charm your
talent!
hope
enjoyed my
elfje reply in
fact it is a
challenge
one
I run
and I invite
you to participate with
happy
happy
is the
prompt if you
accept the elfje poem
challenge
the
link to
the rules and
prompts, love and happy
enjoy
๐ Mick
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Thank you for the compliment. Happy to take you up on the offer..๐
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Wao! Wao! Wao! So beautiful and brilliant! Nice diction and strong imagery. “For a short while, her footprints were the earthโs relic” This line really got me. You’re a goddess.
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Thank you so very much. I am honoured.
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You’re welcome. The honour is mine.
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This here is a temple to the muses. Poetry’s perfection. The lesson also rises like a land mass from this deep ocean of beautiful words. All that glitters is not good. Why woe betides many of those who only judge using the scales of physical comeliness which is but skin deep. I really love this one. Sheer magnificence, both in its art form and its didactic nature. I salute you Ma’am!๐ฉ
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๐๐Thank you sir! But your description though ….*lesson rises like a land mass from this deep ocean of beautiful words*…๐
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